Sunday, 10 January 2021

The Voices in the Garden: an introduction

 The Voices in the Garden was the first story I wrote. Entirely autobiographical, I began it when I was suffering from a deep depression and had taken almost a year off work. Like tendrils, the other stories spiralled from it.  I wasn't going to share it. In truth, although it is the most personal, it is also the weakest in many ways. The Swarthy Rogue, were he still around, would undoubtedly claim that 'nowt happens' that 'there's no narrative arc.' (Those were his frequent complaints about my blog.) I guess both those accusations are equally applicable to my life: a rather flattened narrative arc, quiet and uninteresting. Nowt happens. Repeatedly. But, I am no longer swayed by the gruff, sardonic musings of a flaky, middle-aged window salesman. You may make up your own mind about it.

Anyway, I have a week of home-learning behind me, which is frankly exhausting. I am spending my Sunday listing dresses I am now to plump to wear on EBAY and watching The Stand. I may have a glass of ginger wine later - such is the giddy hedonism of my life. 

I'd love my stories to be published, properly, but have no idea how to go about it. But thank you to everyone who read and commented. Each comment made me smile. I have an idea for another story in the series. It is whispering to me. It is inspired by this rather wonderful 17th century manor house called Horden Hall which stands proudly by the North Sea in between two very humble pit villages. I'd like to bring Nell back (my favourite character from Lost).  I'm not quite done with her yet. Maybe Winter too. 

The Voices in the Garden: Part 1 will follow tomorrow. 





5 comments:

  1. I always enjoyed your blog and find your stories intriguing. Can't wait to read the next one.

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  2. Happy new year to you. And hurrah for a new story! Thank you for sharing your work, it’s been so nice to read. And, without wishing to be sniffy about the opinion of Swarthy Rogues, plenty of great modern novels are more about people and place and atmosphere than they are about driving forward a plot. So there.

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  3. Rochester clearly never read Dorotjy Whipple! Character, description, and observation are just as important as narrative arc and action, and you do those splendidly. And he only has hinself to blame in many ways if he didn't like the narrative arc. Glad you are writing and sharing. Good luck with the ebay sales.

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